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Name 10/03/06(Sat)16:15 No.58105
Heh heh. Pretty cool drawing. I saved as'd. If constructive criticism's what you want, I stared at it a bit and found three things:
The feet do look weird. On her right foot the heel curves from ankle to foot too slowly - it should be a drastic and sharp turn. IOW, feet aren't made of rubber lol.
The legs are foreshortened and, because there are no shades or gradations to tip the viewer off, look short and stalky, which isn't helped by the smaller proportions on the rest of her. (Not sure what you could do about that).
Lastly, and this is just for show and style I guess, you could add more detail with the hands. You certainly did nothing wrong with them - the bumps for knuckles on her right hand are very good. You could simply add little cusps for joints and/or cusps or partial ovals for knuckles on her left hand. |